definitely some clear progress here, the work is very interesting, and the sketchy lined look gives some nice energy.
Nice idea, but try to keep lines cleaner next time and keep shading somehow more delicate. It'd improve the whole thing to next level. Just saying.
The pose and the shadings are quite impressive,but I think there are too much in the face,he now looks a bit like a zombie.
You are very talented.
reminds me of Bruce camble a bit
I don't know who that is
what an improvement
This is really good I like the rough shading!
Yeah, looks better
I always loved that scene, great job!
Wow . The progress in your technique is really remarkable !!! Very good work! Just do not forget to do more study on the contrast , light and shadow . You are great! You keep improving every step! Your effort is notorious . Congrats! X3